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Re: Anyone else get turned off by grammar/punctuation issues?
« Reply #50 on: March 03, 2017, 02:14:04 AM »
My contention was that if the computer wasn't smart enough to catch that little mistake and figure out what I meant what was the point of it!  The problem was the computer and I just found it's weakness.

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I did find one cute idea on Wikipedia's discussion of comma splices, that whether they're incorrect depends on your fame.

"Lynne Truss observes: "so many highly respected writers observe the splice comma that a rather unfair rule emerges on this one: only do it if you're famous." She cites Samuel Beckett, E. M. Forster, and Somerset Maugham. "Done knowingly by an established writer, the comma splice is effective, poetic, dashing. Done equally knowingly by people who are not published writers, it can look weak or presumptuous. Done ignorantly by ignorant people, it is awful.""

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I do like your reasoning about the computer - and it's kind of unnerving how close we are to that now. When I'm typing something into my phone to look up info, I've recently noticed that if I misspell the word as I'm typing it (happens about 80% of the time - large fingers, small keys) I don't even have to correct the misspelled word - I can just tap on it and it automatically changes to the correct spelling. Google's had the "Did you mean...?" feature for a long time, and of course we're all familiar with the amusement autocorrect sometimes provides, but to make that simple connection - if (1) a word is misspelled and if (2) the user touches the misspelled word, then correct the spelling - brings it really close to mind-reading AFAIAC.




About being famous and permitted to use comma splices - one of my favorite authors has, in his last three books, been using them regularly. His earlier books were more strictly punctuated, though he uses semicolons, dashes, and parentheses quite heavily, but it seems like as his renown grows, his publishers are letting him just write what he likes and punctuate it as he likes. It pulls me up short now and then, but his style seems particularly well suited to it, where with other authors, I think it would be jarring.


I follow him on Twitter, by the way, and last week he made a joke and I replied to him with a playful correction - something along the lines of:
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Me: You spelled 'beer' wrong


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Re: Anyone else get turned off by grammar/punctuation issues?
« Reply #51 on: March 03, 2017, 09:00:46 AM »
Apparently the Amazon outage last week was due, at bottom, to a typo! :o

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Re: Anyone else get turned off by grammar/punctuation issues?
« Reply #52 on: March 04, 2017, 07:55:49 AM »
Oh I agree.

Authors should never be the only ones to edit their own work (it's easy to see what you intended to write, instead of what you actually wrote).

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Re: Anyone else get turned off by grammar/punctuation issues?
« Reply #53 on: March 05, 2017, 04:52:47 AM »
Nope unless I cannot understand what the author mean.

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Re: Anyone else get turned off by grammar/punctuation issues?
« Reply #54 on: March 05, 2017, 01:29:28 PM »
Anything that pulls me out of the story is -- let's face it -- not good. Writers have an obligation to make the reader's task easy and to make the words fade into the background. I'm still amazed how easy it is to miss errors, so I've accepted that editing and proofreading have to be done well and repeatedly. It's astonishing how the mind plays tricks and lets one skip over goofs only to see them later leaving one wondering "How on Earth did I miss that?"

I haven't found a huge error rate when reading other people's work, maybe several typos per novel. But each one pulls me out, especially if the story is good and otherwise flows really well. It's a paradox of sorts: the closer you get to perfection, the closer you need to be.


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Re: Anyone else get turned off by grammar/punctuation issues?
« Reply #55 on: March 28, 2017, 02:20:54 AM »
I find consistent grammar and punctuation errors annoying because it indicates that the author didn't take the time to learn their craft before rushing to publication. I don't expect perfection, as I have found mistakes in even classic literature; but errors of this nature perpetuate the notion that self-published books are substandard. I have read some great books by indie authors and usually find a few mistakes in each book and overlook them in favor of a good story. That said, authors who can't edit their own work should hire someone to do it for them. Otherwise the finished product looks like they were careless or too ignorant to notice their errors.

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Re: Anyone else get turned off by grammar/punctuation issues?
« Reply #56 on: April 03, 2017, 08:21:03 AM »
I'm not a trained editor, but I'm one of those people who can read a wall of text and automatically pick out the grammar and spelling errors. I can't stop myself from doing so. My brain is just wired that way. Because of the prevalence of errors these days in publications of all types, I've learned to ignore the occasional one, but if there are too many in the first few pages, that's it, I'm done.

For authors that are new to me, I have a two step process to weed out the ones that have grammar/spelling problems. First, I read a few of the 1 and 2 star reviews. If any of them mention editing issues, I move on. Second, I download a sample. If there are more than a couple of errors of any kind in a 20 page sample, that's enough for me to delete it. I'm not asking for perfection, but I do feel that if an author is asking people to pay money for their product, they should make some effort to adhere to standard English grammar conventions. Stylistic choices like occasional sentence fragments or comma usage don't bother me that much, but things like switching between past and present tense in same paragraph, incorrect word usage, or incorrect capitalization drive me crazy.

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Re: Anyone else get turned off by grammar/punctuation issues?
« Reply #57 on: April 05, 2017, 04:44:46 AM »
Yes! Definitely. Bad grammar is such a turn off while reading something interesting.It breaks your flow.

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Re: Anyone else get turned off by grammar/punctuation issues?
« Reply #58 on: April 06, 2017, 10:01:00 AM »
Anything that pulls me out of the story is -- let's face it -- not good. Writers have an obligation to make the reader's task easy and to make the words fade into the background. I'm still amazed how easy it is to miss errors, so I've accepted that editing and proofreading have to be done well and repeatedly. It's astonishing how the mind plays tricks and lets one skip over goofs only to see them later leaving one wondering "How on Earth did I miss that?"

I haven't found a huge error rate when reading other people's work, maybe several typos per novel. But each one pulls me out, especially if the story is good and otherwise flows really well. It's a paradox of sorts: the closer you get to perfection, the closer you need to be.

It does break the flow of the story.  My mom (former teacher and librarian) has zero tolerance! LOL 

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Re: Anyone else get turned off by grammar/punctuation issues?
« Reply #59 on: May 16, 2017, 04:30:05 PM »
I don't mind the occasional typo or misused word. But if it's a lot, it drives me batty. I'm a writer/freelance editor and I find myself editing the book in my head instead of enjoying the story.

I always check the reviews. If there's even one mentioning typos/grammar/etc, I won't touch it, no matter how good it sounds.

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Re: Anyone else get turned off by grammar/punctuation issues?
« Reply #60 on: June 12, 2017, 01:48:19 PM »
Is there a way to add a poll to this?  I'd like to see the results all in one place.

Sounds like most here aren't turned off by a typo or two but cannot turn off their internal editor when a book has too many usage issues.

For reading, "your welcome" might be my current pet peeve, but I don't usually see that one in novels.  Run-on sentences that join independent clauses with mere commas is another peeve of mine (like "She ran, then she walked, then she stopped.")

For writing, I seriously can catch most of my own typos (English degrees have to be good for something, right?).  When I don't, at least I have beta readers, grammarly, prowritingaid, and editors.
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Re: Anyone else get turned off by grammar/punctuation issues?
« Reply #61 on: June 12, 2017, 03:30:59 PM »
Whatever you do, should you choose to complain about it, make sure you KNOW what you're talking about! I'm with the rest, I will read samples and am a harsh critic. I am as harsh as I expect from my editor and I see few books of any type that suck me in enough to stop seeing the issues. That's with ALL books, not just indie.

However, when I received a ranty email from a self professed editor offering to take over editing on my books? Because she couldn't understand how any editor could allow me to publish all those possessive apostrophes for single characters before the s instead of after, insisting that there is no difference between individual and plural possessives. Well, I binned that editor's request immediately and scrapped every opinion they had, because they clearly were clueless. (Sorry, in their world it should read binned that editors' request, but I can't bring myself to write it like that.)

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Re: Anyone else get turned off by grammar/punctuation issues?
« Reply #62 on: June 13, 2017, 10:56:05 PM »
Because she couldn't understand how any editor could allow me to publish all those possessive apostrophes for single characters before the s instead of after, insisting that there is no difference between individual and plural possessives.
Sounds like a teenager who's discovered the beauty of grammar and wants to open everyone's eyes to it.  They'll probably also correct "For you and me" to "For you and I"  (and that one's a huge turn-off for me;))

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Re: Anyone else get turned off by grammar/punctuation issues?
« Reply #63 on: June 14, 2017, 04:26:41 PM »
... she couldn't understand how any editor could allow me to publish all those possessive apostrophes for single characters before the s instead of after, insisting that there is no difference between individual and plural possessives. Well, I binned that editor's request immediately and scrapped every opinion they had, because they clearly were clueless. (Sorry, in their world it should read binned that editors' request, but I can't bring myself to write it like that.)

There are some... unusual opinions out there.
One of my clients and I agreed that his MS would be best served by having a different set of eyes on it for the post-edit proofreading pass. He has a friend who's a grade school teacher (in the 8-12 age range), and she happily accepted his offer. When she got done with it, he sent it to me to look over her changes. It was well over 100K words, and she had changed the punctuation in almost every line of dialogue so that instead of reading
"Hello," he said.
they read
"Hello." He said.
AND lines such as
"Let's go." She turned and left.
were changed to
"Let's go," she turned and left.

Blew my tiny little mind.

I've recently had another client mention that her former editor instructed her that any "well-known" brand names or proper nouns should be italicized. So, for instance,
He finished the Coke he was drinking and glanced at his Rolex. He was going to be late for his meeting at the Eiffel Tower.

I have actually noticed that a lot of my British clients tend to italicize proper nouns and item names (for instance, "a potion made of willow bark should cure your headache"). I feel like there has to be a reason, some valid grammatical rule or guideline that got misinterpreted or corrupted, but I can't think what it would be.
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Re: Anyone else get turned off by grammar/punctuation issues?
« Reply #64 on: June 15, 2017, 12:56:22 AM »
I've recently had another client mention that her former editor instructed her that any "well-known" brand names or proper nouns should be italicized. So, for instance,
He finished the Coke he was drinking and glanced at his Rolex. He was going to be late for his meeting at the Eiffel Tower.

I have actually noticed that a lot of my British clients tend to italicize proper nouns and item names (for instance, "a potion made of willow bark should cure your headache"). I feel like there has to be a reason, some valid grammatical rule or guideline that got misinterpreted or corrupted, but I can't think what it would be.
The willow bark makes me think it's from biology - binominal names ("Latin" names of species) get italicized in science documents. It's not a grammar rule, but part of the official system for naming in biology.

The brand name ones I sometimes see marked as quotes ("I'll have a 'Coke'" or, worse, "I'll have a "Coke"") instead of italics. Though Eiffel Tower is just plain weird.
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