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Critique my cover (it's a trap)

2K views 37 replies 21 participants last post by  WyandVoidbringer 
#1 ·
Hey I just paid many moneys for this cover for my new epic urban fantasy whqt do you thin



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(disclaimer: fake on purpose. What's the point if we can't all laugh a little at ourselves?)
 
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Tizzy said:
That font is very difficult to read. It's too stretched vertically, and the cover looks too charged with text. Particularly the subtitle is almost impossible to read with that font/color mix.

Or at least that's what I think.
ok fair fair but did you even check the toenail version
 
#8 ·
Not enough blue glow.  It's gotta really emphasize that title.  Plus the man chest needs more focus.  Maybe a little blue glow around that too?  Or perhaps your protagonist should be hugging the image - or shooting blue balls at it, if Chesty is supposed to be the antagonist.
 
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