That font is very difficult to read. It's too stretched vertically, and the cover looks too charged with text. Particularly the subtitle is almost impossible to read with that font/color mix.
That font is very difficult to read. It's too stretched vertically, and the cover looks too charged with text. Particularly the subtitle is almost impossible to read with that font/color mix.
Not enough blue glow. It's gotta really emphasize that title. Plus the man chest needs more focus. Maybe a little blue glow around that too? Or perhaps your protagonist should be hugging the image - or shooting blue balls at it, if Chesty is supposed to be the antagonist.
since youve given me sooo many great comments and i have neither time nor talent to do them right, here's a link to the .psd on my googledrive. have at it, music lovers. i can haz wanna see some improvement!!!1!
Book 1: I Glow Blue (and So Will You)
Book 2: I Glow Pink (and You Will Shrink)
Book 3: I Glow Indigo (and Out You Go)
Book 4: I Glow Purple (and Then You Die)
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