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Offline Est1889

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Re: First publication (need help from eagle-eyed people)
« Reply #1 on: February 13, 2018, 06:26:00 AM »
the Great Planes of the North. ?  :P In your author bio.

The format looks good in general until you see a wall of text written by #0000001. I think paragraphs would help more than the artistic leaving it as a wall of text so readers don't get blinded and poof out of existence. :P

Good luck with your book!

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Re: First publication (need help from eagle-eyed people)
« Reply #2 on: February 13, 2018, 10:18:39 AM »
An epistolary novel! Well I'll be. Got me to download, that's for sure. :)

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Re: First publication (need help from eagle-eyed people)
« Reply #3 on: February 14, 2018, 06:10:24 AM »
I clicked on the novel and went to Amazon. The description was too accurate for me. As in it told me what was going to happen. . . more like a plot summary. The other thing that I noticed seemed juxtaposed to that.  The actual descriptions seemed to lack substance. A futuristic alien race (unknown) discovers the human dilemma (undefined end of humanity), and what led up to it. It's as if some major unknown wiped us out for an unknown reason.  I'm just having a very hard time grasping what it is and why I'll enjoy it.  Hook me!