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« on: March 09, 2018, 04:08:37 PM »
I've just finished Stephen King's "The Stand" and have been reading James Lee Burke as well.

Anyone here in the KB universe had any recommendation for FICTION that has helped them become a better writer? I'm not specifically talking about reading in your specific genre to discover tropes, etc.

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« Reply #1 on: March 09, 2018, 04:28:59 PM »
I've just finished Stephen King's "The Stand" and have been reading James Lee Burke as well.

Anyone here in the KB universe had any recommendation for FICTION that has helped them become a better writer? I'm not specifically talking about reading in your specific genre to discover tropes, etc.

Thanks!

I've always been drawn to works that tell me something new about storytelling, even if it isn't something i'll use (or something i can't use because I don't have the skill) which means my answer to this is a pretty eclectic list that goes all the way back to my English degree.

But to start with an author you already name-checked, It is my favorite King book, more for how he told the story than how the ending doesn't quite pay out. Before that, Christine was a fine example of using first and third person interchangeably. Also in the horror genre, I learned a lot from Rice's first two vampire books.

Then there's Faulkner's The Sound and the Fury and Wolff's Mrs. Dalloway, the plays of Luigi Pirandello, Douglas Adams, Katheryn Kurtz's Deryni Chronicles, and Donaldson's Thomas Covenant the Unbeliever books, all of which I consumed at some point during my childhood.

For current works of great influence, I probably have to start and end with Neal Stephenson's books. Right now, he's the only author I read consistently, who keeps me guessing, and whose approach to storytelling changes from book to book. Although I did just finish The Three Body Problem by Cixin Liu, which I found really interesting for a number of reasons, both in terms of plot and stylistically.

Oh, and comic books. I probably learned more about storytelling from Alan Moore than any of the above authors.

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« Reply #2 on: March 09, 2018, 04:29:33 PM »
Hemingway. Learning to be simple is one of the most valuable things I've done.

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« Reply #3 on: March 09, 2018, 04:30:12 PM »
Literally everything.

I read 3-4 books a week, any genre, anything and everything. I know the staff at my local library on a first-name basis, down to Dewey, the facilities guy. I buy books by the box at Goodwill and yard sales and then drop them off again as donations when I'm done. The precarious stack of books on my nightstand would kill me in an earthquake.

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« Reply #4 on: March 09, 2018, 04:31:47 PM »
Everything I've ever read, including (or, perhaps, especially) the bad ones.
 
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« Reply #5 on: March 09, 2018, 07:15:05 PM »
Mary Stewart for romantic suspense. 

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« Reply #6 on: March 09, 2018, 07:21:41 PM »
Literally everything.

I read 3-4 books a week, any genre, anything and everything. I know the staff at my local library on a first-name basis, down to Dewey, the facilities guy. I buy books by the box at Goodwill and yard sales and then drop them off again as donations when I'm done. The precarious stack of books on my nightstand would kill me in an earthquake.

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« Reply #7 on: March 09, 2018, 08:09:40 PM »
I know the staff at my local library on a first-name basis, down to Dewey, the facilities guy.

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« Reply #8 on: March 09, 2018, 09:15:37 PM »
I've just finished Stephen King's "The Stand" and have been reading James Lee Burke as well.

Anyone here in the KB universe had any recommendation for FICTION that has helped them become a better writer? I'm not specifically talking about reading in your specific genre to discover tropes, etc.

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I don't have a recommendation, because James Lee Burke would be my answer.

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« Reply #9 on: March 09, 2018, 09:35:16 PM »
A guy named Dewey working in a library. Talk about fulfilling your destiny.  8)

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« Reply #10 on: March 09, 2018, 11:46:44 PM »
Usually popular artists first works are the best. I don't read a terrible lot. But these have all left a lasting memory that I pull from.

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« Reply #11 on: March 10, 2018, 01:19:09 AM »
I recently wrote a blog entry about my major influencers. But really, I've been a book addict since One Fish, Two Fish, Red Fish, Blue Fish and never stopped reading consuming books like other people breathe. I have an entire small bedroom devoted to paperback shelf space and still have boxes that won't fit. That's not counting the hardbacks in the closet or the 2700 books on my Kindle. I was crazy about Crazy Horse, Bobbsey Twins, White Fang, The Black Stallion, any dog rescue story, Canadian Mounties, science fiction (of any type hard, soft, opera, military), fantasy of any type, thriller, PI crime, UF, paranormal, and lately romance. Each has contributed to my writing in various ways.

I admire Asimov for his short story writing and the epic universe that all his stories fit within.
I admire Tolkien for his scope and complexity even if I gnash my teeth at how he wrote it (what not to do!).
I look at what Robert Jordan did as going too far into description and not engaging my emotions (so what not to do, and don't tug the braid!).
I look at all the dinner descriptions in GRRM's tomes as another what not to do :) Although killing off characters after developing them is fun!
I have The Sorcerer's Lady by Paula Volsky as an example of an almost fantasy romance that I want to tweak (plus a how not to end it!)
I remind myself often that the ending to Trudi Canavan's first series is appropriate even if I almost hurled my book across the room!
I admire Gina Robinson and Kristen Painter for their humor and wonderful characters.
I study what Brandon Sanderson does for magic systems and story/character development
I developed a fondness for poetic description from Barbara Hambly, Janny Wurts, and Grace Draven.
I absorbed what Tanya Huff did for urban fantasy before that was even a genre. Blood Ties ftw!
And I've certainly absorbed world building and great character creation from Mercedes Lackey - Valdemar world, Anne McCaffrey - Pern world, C. J. Cherrryh and her cats in space, Margaret Weis & Tracy Hickman, Ed Greenwood (and anything Forgotten Realms related), Christie Golden, and all the other wonderful authors I've read over the years.

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« Reply #12 on: March 10, 2018, 03:52:28 PM »
Wow...great stuff C Gold. Well put.

I actually got The Sound and the Fury yesterday.

Thanks for all the responses everyone...very helpful!
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Lois McMaster Bujold. alas, rather than inspiring me, she makes me want to throw down my pen and cry "I am not worthy!"
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The Prince of Tides by Pat Conroy: his prose is amazing. Short stories by Eric Frank Russell.

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« Reply #16 on: March 10, 2018, 07:45:59 PM »
I look at what Robert Jordan did as going too far into description and not engaging my emotions (so what not to do, and don't tug the braid!).


I think Jordan can be held up as an example of both what to do and what not do to.  When he's on, he's magnificent.  When he's off, we get Crossroads of Twilight.


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I actually love Tolkien's style.  *shrug*


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« Reply #17 on: March 10, 2018, 10:55:56 PM »
Brian Jacques Redwall series for strong good guy/bad guy/gray guy examples (and great stories), the Jack Reacher series for pacing, and Goosebumps, because R.L. Stine knows exactly how to use a cliffhanger and demonstrates it at every chapter. I'm also a fan of Anton Chekov's famous gun.

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« Reply #18 on: March 10, 2018, 11:07:28 PM »
Lol @ C Gold for the Robert Jordan braid tugging reference. IMO read the first 3 books of that series and stop.

I adored Brian Jaques novels and Margaret Weis & Tracy Hickman series.

Last thing I read that was so much ficking fun and left me thinking I need to study the [crap] out of this book was The Blade Itself by Joe Abercrombie. Insanely entertaining and makes you a better writer, hands down.

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« Reply #19 on: March 10, 2018, 11:19:39 PM »
I think Jordan can be held up as an example of both what to do and what not do to.  When he's on, he's magnificent.  When he's off, we get Crossroads of Twilight.

I actually love Tolkien's style.  *shrug*

I tried to come up with a joke about a card catalog, but I've got nothing.  So Flay wins this round.   ;)
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Tolkien was inaccessible and intimidating to start out with. Three names for everyone, long stretches at a time with one party to where my sense of where each group was during events was totally shot, and Tom Bombadil (ugh, just ugh!) Some bad character whining (oh, I suck, I'm going to write bad poetry about how my life sucks and everyone is against me and waaaah!) Oh and the Silmarillion which should have been fun but wasn't. But boy does he delve into the full world experience with history, stories, basically the stuff he was interested in. Remarkably deep world building and certainly someone to study.




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« Reply #20 on: March 11, 2018, 03:38:19 AM »
Interesting that this kicked off with King but nobody's mentioned his part-autobiography, part-guide On Writing. Writing advice books generally suck but King is such a down-to-earth, no-[bullcrap] kind of guy that I found it both useful and enjoyable.

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« Reply #21 on: March 11, 2018, 10:39:28 AM »
I have a hard time separating ideas. Music: like Pink Floyd, Zeppelin, The Dead Kennedys and the punk aesthetic, trip hop vibes, old jazz and blues, heavier stuff like Slipknot or The Deftones, they all have something to say, and trying to capture those moods...mixed with film, and then, of course, a gazillion books and short stories makes for an enigmatic mess. As a musician, it's much easier to point to influences; as a writer, I have no idea. Although, I think...

Literally everything.

This covers it.

I've also adopted lots of great advice from writers whose books I really don't care for, ironic, huh? But, for me, it's those weird books that stick with me the most, stuff that must have caught me at just the right time during my own drama: A Princess of Mars, What Mad Universe, Ender's Game, Silence of the Lambs, The Long Walk, Elric of Melnibone and Dhalgren to name a few. I'm sure they tug on my pen way more than I'm aware of. I'm always chasing emotion, empathy, because, I think the more we feel, and the deeper we feel it...the better humans we become.

I'm still discovering old and new authors, musicians and storytellers, creatives I never heard of; I'm old enough now that I can sense them rearranging the cogs, realigning the belts and gears...adding to the mess.
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« Reply #22 on: March 11, 2018, 10:45:17 AM »
You make a decimal point.

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« Reply #23 on: March 11, 2018, 12:34:01 PM »
You make a decimal point.

I tried to come up with a joke about a card catalog, but I've got nothing.  So Flay wins this round.   ;)

Ha, ha! You're a real card for thinking up that one. I'm going to catalog it so I can laugh at it again later.

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« Reply #24 on: March 11, 2018, 02:31:31 PM »
I've just finished Stephen King's "The Stand" and have been reading James Lee Burke as well.

Anyone here in the KB universe had any recommendation for FICTION that has helped them become a better writer? I'm not specifically talking about reading in your specific genre to discover tropes, etc.

Thanks!

I watched how Dorothy Dunnet reduced time into narrative summary, it was beautiful. I tried it, found I could do it. Wonderful jump-cuts too, from once scene to another. Same with Patrick O'Brien. Reduced the horrible situation where you are just grinding through one direct scener after another in order to forward the plot when it could well be done with NS, and well-done too.

O'Brien just omits any unnecessary and boring transitions by a fast jump. He is so good at it.

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I checked out your jokes and give them stamps of approval.  8)

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« Reply #26 on: March 11, 2018, 03:27:25 PM »
I watched how Dorothy Dunnet reduced time into narrative summary, it was beautiful. I tried it, found I could do it. Wonderful jump-cuts too, from once scene to another. Same with Patrick O'Brien. Reduced the horrible situation where you are just grinding through one direct scener after another in order to forward the plot when it could well be done with NS, and well-done too.

O'Brien just omits any unnecessary and boring transitions by a fast jump. He is so good at it.

Reduced time into narrative summary - I've never heard of this before, I'm fascinated by the idea of moving beyond that grind you mention 'one scene after another'. I'll be looking into Dorothy Dunnet and Patrick O'Brien's approach. Thanks for mentioning that.  :)

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« Reply #27 on: March 11, 2018, 03:49:06 PM »
O'Brian's jump cuts are pretty hardcore though. You have to pay very close attention to his prose in general, but when I started reading him it was the cuts that threw me. Like, two characters will be deep in conversation over several pages, one will mention he has an appointment at the Admiralty later, and then the very next line - with no transitioning or indication or attribution at all, apart from the subject matter changing slightly - is that same character talking to somebody else entirely different, hours later, at the Admiralty.

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« Reply #28 on: March 11, 2018, 05:38:06 PM »
Lois McMaster Bujold. alas, rather than inspiring me, she makes me want to throw down my pen and cry "I am not worthy!"

I know what you mean!! She is such an amazing writer.
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« Reply #29 on: March 11, 2018, 06:00:58 PM »
Although I still have a lot of learning to do, I know that reading R.A. Salvatore's work has helped me to write better fight scenes. Other influences in various ways have been Lois McMaster Bujold, Eric Frank Russell, and Elizabeth Peters.
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« Reply #30 on: March 11, 2018, 06:22:58 PM »
O'Brian's jump cuts are pretty hardcore though. You have to pay very close attention to his prose in general, but when I started reading him it was the cuts that threw me. Like, two characters will be deep in conversation over several pages, one will mention he has an appointment at the Admiralty later, and then the very next line - with no transitioning or indication or attribution at all, apart from the subject matter changing slightly - is that same character talking to somebody else entirely different, hours later, at the Admiralty.

Interesting. I haven't read any O'Brien novels, so I appreciate this insight. I'll have to see if I find it jarring and whether or not I'd find some of what he does useful from a stylistic standpoint and whether I can employ some of his approach in my own work. Are there parts of O'Brien's use of narrative summary that you find useful in your own writing?

Although I still have a lot of learning to do, I know that reading R.A. Salvatore's work has helped me to write better fight scenes. Other influences in various ways have been Lois McMaster Bujold, Eric Frank Russell, and Elizabeth Peters.

Just in reading about narrative summary today, I'd read that Dunnett's approach to fight scenes is considered exemplary as well, so her writing might be worth exploring in that context too.  :)

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« Reply #31 on: March 11, 2018, 06:26:25 PM »
I don't like jarring jumps between paragraphs. That's what spacers are used for.

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« Reply #32 on: March 12, 2018, 04:23:14 AM »
O'Brian's jump cuts are pretty hardcore though. You have to pay very close attention to his prose in general, but when I started reading him it was the cuts that threw me. Like, two characters will be deep in conversation over several pages, one will mention he has an appointment at the Admiralty later, and then the very next line - with no transitioning or indication or attribution at all, apart from the subject matter changing slightly - is that same character talking to somebody else entirely different, hours later, at the Admiralty.

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« Reply #33 on: March 12, 2018, 07:04:50 AM »
On the plus side: Agatha Christie, for insane economy of prose. Her character and setting descriptions are dead on and delivered in the fewest words possible. I wish I could learn to be that precise, but then again, she was describing a clear social hierarchy whereas I'm writing about people in our supposedly classless U.S. society.

On the minus side: Just about any current no-name romance writer of fluffy stories, for paper-thin characterization, objectionable language, outright cheesy plotting, horrible word use, and my favorite, malapropisms. They are a dreadful warning. Even skimming one of those books makes me work twice as hard to eliminate their common errors from my own work.

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« Reply #34 on: March 12, 2018, 07:18:25 AM »
On the minus side: Just about any current no-name romance writer of fluffy stories, for paper-thin characterization, objectionable language, outright cheesy plotting, horrible word use, and my favorite, malapropisms. They are a dreadful warning. Even skimming one of those books makes me work twice as hard to eliminate their common errors from my own work.

Great points!

As for me... watching the Andy Griffith Show and All In the Family for great dialog. It often seems to be just throw-away stuff at first but really gives great insight into the characters.

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« Reply #35 on: March 12, 2018, 09:38:28 AM »
Oh, that's poor writing, not something to be admired.

Sounds like a technique borrowed from a screenplay - camera zooms in on a character's face will he's speaking, and when it pulls out again he's in a completely different setting. I don't think it translates well to novels. Might be even more confusing in an audio book.


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Re: Fiction that has helped you be a better writer?
« Reply #36 on: March 12, 2018, 10:12:58 AM »
Reduced time into narrative summary - I've never heard of this before, I'm fascinated by the idea of moving beyond that grind you mention 'one scene after another'. I'll be looking into Dorothy Dunnet and Patrick O'Brien's approach. Thanks for mentioning that.  :)
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Re: Fiction that has helped you be a better writer?
« Reply #37 on: March 12, 2018, 10:17:08 AM »
Oh, that's poor writing, not something to be admired.

Love this. Going to tape it to the monitor.

For me, anything I read I hope helps me be a better writer. I try to learn something from every book, even those bad ones I'm forcing myself to finish so I can brand it into my head to not do that. Unless it's something that's selling like crazy, and then I try to see why, and how I can do it, but better.

Two influences for me early on that stick out are Dick Francis, for his lean, clean style of writing, and his "every man" characters. Then Stephen King for his ideas and how he immerses you into the story. I'm still afraid to re-read The Tommyknockers. That book scared the crap out of me, and I don't want to ever lose that feeling.

Why is that poor writing? He knew what he was doing and it works. He'd only been writing for about twenty-five years. I think he had it figured out.

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Re: Fiction that has helped you be a better writer?
« Reply #38 on: March 12, 2018, 04:20:50 PM »
Mary Stewart for romantic suspense. 

Watership Down for amazing characters.  Bigwig is still my hero!  8)

YES! I devoured as much Mary Stewart as I could find in my youth, including the Merlin books. They remain such a shining experience in my head that I refuse to read any other Arthurian myth because they don't do Merlin as well as Stewart did.

Anybody ever read any Natalie Babbit? People remember her for Tuck Everlasting, but the book that really intrigued me was The Eyes of the Amaryllis. I had never read a book where the sea was its own character before. It's quite a lesson on how to use a setting to evoke a mood.

Mary O'Hara's My Friend Flicka trilogy taught me about how to turn descriptions into poetry. I want to someday describe scenery as well as she did.

In my older years, the Dresden books were quite a revelation, too. Especially the later books, post book 12, when he really started piling on the feels. We'd get paragraphs and paragraphs about Dresden's inner workings as he tried not to kill somebody, and it's amazing.
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Re: Fiction that has helped you be a better writer?
« Reply #39 on: March 12, 2018, 04:26:46 PM »
Anything by Neal Stephenson.

He's the only writer I'll read just to marvel at how he puts words together. They story doesn't even matter.

If you've not read the first few pages of Snow Crash, do yourself a favor and do the free look inside:

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I'll never be able to write like him, but it gives me something to aspire to, and that's something I desperately need.

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Re: Fiction that has helped you be a better writer?
« Reply #40 on: March 12, 2018, 04:46:07 PM »
Melville and Ray Bradbury. They took chances.  ;)

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Re: Fiction that has helped you be a better writer?
« Reply #41 on: March 12, 2018, 05:31:05 PM »
Melville and Ray Bradbury. They took chances.  ;)

Ray Bradbury, absolutely. Martian Chronicles and the short story "Rain". That was a little masterpiece.

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Re: Fiction that has helped you be a better writer?
« Reply #42 on: March 13, 2018, 09:55:22 AM »
Pretty much everything and anything I read.

Having an example of good writing definitely affects my writing.
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Re: Fiction that has helped you be a better writer?
« Reply #43 on: March 13, 2018, 04:47:23 PM »
Anything by Neal Stephenson.

He's the only writer I'll read just to marvel at how he puts words together. They story doesn't even matter.

If you've not read the first few pages of Snow Crash, do yourself a favor and do the free look inside:

https://www.amazon.com/Snow-Crash-Novel-Neal-Stephenson-ebook/dp/B000FBJCJE

I'll never be able to write like him, but it gives me something to aspire to, and that's something I desperately need.

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Re: Fiction that has helped you be a better writer?
« Reply #44 on: March 15, 2018, 07:48:14 PM »
Just in reading about narrative summary today, I'd read that Dunnett's approach to fight scenes is considered exemplary as well, so her writing might be worth exploring in that context too.  :)

Oh, good to know! I'll have to check her out.
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Re: Fiction that has helped you be a better writer?
« Reply #45 on: March 15, 2018, 10:10:32 PM »
Pretty much everything and anything I read.

Having an example of good writing definitely affects my writing.

Same here. It doesn't mean I will sound anything like the author I'm reading: it's more about inspiration than influence.

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Re: Fiction that has helped you be a better writer?
« Reply #46 on: March 16, 2018, 02:30:20 AM »
Hemingway. Learning to be simple is one of the most valuable things I've done.

Yes! Anything by Hemingway, including the failures. I learned as much from the awful Across the River and Into the Trees as I did from the magnificent A Moveable Feast.

And speaking of awful, there was a Netflix? movie recently based on one of the posthumous Hemingways that was pretty bad, but it too was instructive.

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Re: Fiction that has helped you be a better writer?
« Reply #47 on: March 16, 2018, 02:33:21 AM »
Up until two years ago, I read only what I preferred. Now, I read just about anything. Even market analysis reports. It's made me a better writer.