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Is there a particular plotting method you ascribe to?
What would you charge? MS is approx 88k.
Dennis, based on the sample work I've had done, it has been impossible to judge plot or structure assessment based on 1000, 3000, or 5000 words.
Do you do manuscript assessments?
It's difficult (both for the editor and me) to evaluate with such a small sampling.
Why do some people who like [something] get so crazy about it?
I am now uncertain if this kind of artistic license is also "okay" or prudent.
Nicholas II was not himself a brutal man, but a gentle family man
Young Zena Ezrah always dreamed of becoming a space soldier. But, the problem is, she's a slave, she's a woman, and she's gay.
In a Starlight Galaxy, ruled by Linus Saros, the High Priest, women have no rights, and homosexuality is a capital crime.
Zena must [do what?] to [achieve what?], otherwise [something terrible will happen.]
Using this two paragraph method implies the two females are the romantic leads with one another.
a continuous plot without actual 'endings' for the individual books
the first ebook unfortunately contains 100K words worth of build-up, the plot doesn't really kick off until the second ebook
to merge the two first books into a duology and make this duology the entry point to the series
The book is to be about collecting animation cels from Japanese shows and films.
I prefer the second one, but make the title much bigger and your last name smaller.
particularly warriors and mages who don't look like mediocre cosplayers.
Another member here once said that the blurb "lives" between Acts 1 and 2 of the story
Android AIs battle corporate mercenaries across the freezing sands of Mars.
On March 3, 2457 at 1532, Mars local, Sam Macluski died.
Three months later he was revived and found his mind uploaded to an android body
alongside a sentient Artificial Intelligence.
Sam discovers a conspiracy where corrupt government officials intend to kill him. Again.
To preserve his memories
and prevent other innocents from being killed, he must find a way to escape from Mars.
When Sam, and six other androids with no human component, begins the flight to freedom, they discover that Earth Fleet is after them too.
Now, Earth Fleet wants to capture the androids for their tech while corporate mercs are bent on total destruction.
What neither adversary has considered is the combination of a devious human mind coupled with the massive intellect of a sentient AI.
Facing corporate espionage, military spies, murderous black ops agents, and marine dropships, can Sam escape Mars?