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I'm thinking the title and author name and the rings around the guardian could be a little brighter so as to stand out better. What does anyone think? 
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    I think it looks really nice. It has a good thumbnail appeal and the text stands out well, plus colors are really working together.
     

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    i love it, i don't even read steampunk but the cover makes me want to try to read it 8)
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    [img width = 500]https://imgur.com/KTOFEnD[/img]

    The final version!
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    Not working for some reason...
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    Yay! At last. What do we think of the final version?



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    Yaaaasssss! Very nice indeed!
             

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    Yaaaasssss! Very nice indeed!

    Yep. I'm pretty happy!
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    Looks amazing!

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    I would assume it's time travel, which is one of my favorite genres. Either way, I love it

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    Hi Jim

    The reason you couldn't find it is that it's not out yet! It should be coming out in April.

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    Nice. A little similar to mine.
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    Nice cover, reads as steampunk/time-travel to me. The title seems...unexciting, but maybe that's a placeholder until you decide what you want to call it?
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    Very nice cover!
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    I would assume it's time travel, which is one of my favorite genres. Either way, I love it

    Thanks! It's time travel and alternate world timelines.
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    Hey Mark.  Your site looks awesome.  really well done.  I 'Followed' you and purchased your first novel "The Sea of Storms" on Amazon.  It seems like it will be an awesome read. Have a great day...Jim

    You're a star, Jim! Thanks so much.
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    Puts me in mind of Madeleine L'Engle. It's really well done. 

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    Nice. A little similar to mine.

    Yes, I see that!
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