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For his entire life, Aiden felt as if he lived someone else's life, trapped in a wrong body, suffocating in a sweltering environment of his small town. So when a chain of unfortunate events leads to him getting stuck in a virtual world of Mongro he embraces the chance to experience a new life...

Hello everyone, I am an unpublished indie author. I was told that the cover is the most important piece in the book sales puzzle, so I followed some guides from the internet and designed one of my own. I need you to give me some of your time and provide me with constructive feedback, and tell me...