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I've posted the contents of the first chapter of Circle of Sorcerers to my blog, and I'd appreciate any feedback. It's here: http://www.latenitebooks.com/2011/06/06/circle-of-sorcerers-chapter-one/
A little critique (of a chapter) perhaps?
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Hey Brian--looks like you got buried. Or maybe everyone PM'd you. Anyway, just a note to say I will be PM'ing a critique. I love reading in this genre. Cheers!
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Brian, forgot to ask: do you want line edits or just a response to the arc of the chapter so far?
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Hey, thanks for replying. 
Whichever you prefer to do is fine with me. I'll take what I can get at this point. hehe
Edit: I should probably say, at least a general impression of the entire thing, then if you want to do line edits I won't stand in anyone's way.
Whichever you prefer to do is fine with me. I'll take what I can get at this point. hehe
Edit: I should probably say, at least a general impression of the entire thing, then if you want to do line edits I won't stand in anyone's way.
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Sent you a PM with a critique.
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Yes, and a very good one at that. I REALLY appreciate the thoughts.D.A. Boulter said:
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Hi Brian, I sent you a PM--let me know if anything's unclear.
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Yes, very well received. I should have a revised chapter up probably tomorrow. I'm far too lazy to drag out my portable hard drive right now, lol! The changes are on the ole laptop.
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