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I have been struggling to write a blurb for my novel and am finding harder than writing the book in the first place 
Anyone care to comment on the following? Is it too short, too boring?
"One hundred years ago the world changed when a group of scientists tried to control the weather and stop climate change. They made the situation worse and in the chaos that ensued, they vanished. Now, the Changers are back and trying to put the world to rights again.
Tom is a twelve year old boy who lives on a farm in a world of constant cloud and acid rain; a world where people scratch a living amongst the wreckage of the past.
When a Changer appears on his farm, he is forced to choose between his family and the possibility of making the world he knows a better place.
If the Changers can be trusted this time?
This is 60,000 word Young Adult/Children's Science Fiction Novel and part one of the Changers trilogy."
Any advice gratefully received
thanks
Mike

Anyone care to comment on the following? Is it too short, too boring?
"One hundred years ago the world changed when a group of scientists tried to control the weather and stop climate change. They made the situation worse and in the chaos that ensued, they vanished. Now, the Changers are back and trying to put the world to rights again.
Tom is a twelve year old boy who lives on a farm in a world of constant cloud and acid rain; a world where people scratch a living amongst the wreckage of the past.
When a Changer appears on his farm, he is forced to choose between his family and the possibility of making the world he knows a better place.
If the Changers can be trusted this time?
This is 60,000 word Young Adult/Children's Science Fiction Novel and part one of the Changers trilogy."
Any advice gratefully received
thanks
Mike