Like the second one better also. Probably agree with the statement about not comparing it to specific authors (although, you maybe could campare it to genres; say, fantasy epic in the near future (heh, just a suggestion : )
Otherwise, the blurb is interesting enough to grab my attention and either purchase or read reviews. Good job.
GeoffW
Otherwise, the blurb is interesting enough to grab my attention and either purchase or read reviews. Good job.
GeoffW
