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I am currently working on my blurb, sometimes I'm happy with it, and other times I absolutely hate it. Any suggestions...?



In a small farming community, something is killing livestock in the dead of night. Sydney journalist and mother, Beth Margraves, is at a turning point in her career when she is asked to cover the mystery.

Beth is reluctant to return to the small town she left soon after high school, leaving behind her widowed Father, and an unanswered marriage proposal from her then boyfriend. Fearful of missing out on an amazing job promotion, Beth packs up her seven year old daughter and her issues and heads back to the town she left so long ago. Is the town really being terrorised by a new breed of dog, hiding in the national park that surrounds it? Or something far worse?

Returning to Brereton Beth will come face to face with not just the town’s Demons, but her own. Inspired by actual events, and shortlisted for the 2010 Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award, 'The Pack' offers thrills and chills for all readers.
 

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I struggled a bit to get into it - especially the first few lines.  Things pick up quite a bit towards the end!

My impression is that you may be including too much information about the plot, and not giving me enough of a feel (especially at first) of what type of book this is. 

I would consider starting with a mention of your main character, state her challenge, and indicate how these might develop.  I made an attempt:

Beth Mangreaves is feeling hopeful. This could be the break she has been waiting for, her chance to prove herself as a journalist.  She had been assigned to cover a sensational story, the unexplained and savage killing of livestock at a small farming community. It meant returning to the town she had left so many years ago, but the story would be worth it.  But as Beth will discover, she is about to face not just the danger that stalks the town, but the demons from her own past.  Inspired by actual events, this novel was shortlisted for the 2010 Amazon Breaktrhough Novel award, "The Pack" offers thrills and chills for all readers.
 
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