Hey,
When your character has an internal thought how do you communicate it?
Example (self-doubt): What would happen if hers didn't as well? she wondered with trepidation.
What would happen if hers didn't as well? she wondered with trepidation.
'What would happen if hers didn't as well?' she wondered with trepidation.
And is 'she wondered with trepidation' redundant since the italics or the quote marks are signaling a thought?
When your character has an internal thought how do you communicate it?
Example (self-doubt): What would happen if hers didn't as well? she wondered with trepidation.
What would happen if hers didn't as well? she wondered with trepidation.
'What would happen if hers didn't as well?' she wondered with trepidation.
And is 'she wondered with trepidation' redundant since the italics or the quote marks are signaling a thought?