[DanaG]

I have posted them on my blog and I'd love any insight that you care to share...the last round of comments I got on the intro and chapter one were extremely helpful. You can PM me if you like.

www.danagranger.com.

 

[DanaG]

I have gotten a very thorough, very detailed critique PMed to me (already thanked the writer by message.)

Any other thoughts, comments, suggestions? Thank you in advance!