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Comments on my rewritten intro & Chapters 1-4?

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I have posted them on my blog and I'd love any insight that you care to share...the last round of comments I got on the intro and chapter one were extremely helpful. You can PM me if you like.
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I have gotten a very thorough, very detailed critique PMed to me (already thanked the writer by message.)

Any other thoughts, comments, suggestions? Thank you in advance!
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