It doesn't make me want to read your books. Someone on here posted a thread a few months back...and it was about finding your "why". Had that video for finding your "why", too. He went on to explain that the bio is wasted by most of us, boring people with our background, hobbies, martial status, etc. How does that show them if you write what they want to read?
Bottom line: People want to know if you're the type of author they want to read. He challenged us to create a bio that did these things:
1. Tell them why you write
2. Tell them your style of writing, what they can expect from your writing
3. Tell them what kind of reader you write for.
None of us can write for everyone. People are interested in knowing if you write for them and how you tell it. Period. If they want to know I have 2 parrots, am married to my high school sweetheart and paint they'll connect with me on social media. When they are in Amazon, they are looking for a new book and/or a new author. Tell them if it should be you.
I followed his advice. I know my bio will turn some off, but will motivate others to look at my work. My sales have improved since doing this, and also a "From the Author" and better keywording.
ETA: Here is the link:
http://www.kboards.com/index.php/topic,192784.0.html