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I reviewed your book quite a while ago. You must have republished the book because my review no longer appears.
However, I vividly remember it having a lot of storyline and plotting issues, along with poor editing.
Now, that book has another one star review. While I don't agree with the reviewer's comment of "bad writing," that person did bring up one of the same problems I mentioned in my review. Obviously, you did not correct the issue before uploading a new version.
From your posts, I can only assume that you cannot afford an editor. However, you should at least try to get some beta readers to point out the issues.
However, I vividly remember it having a lot of storyline and plotting issues, along with poor editing.
Now, that book has another one star review. While I don't agree with the reviewer's comment of "bad writing," that person did bring up one of the same problems I mentioned in my review. Obviously, you did not correct the issue before uploading a new version.
From your posts, I can only assume that you cannot afford an editor. However, you should at least try to get some beta readers to point out the issues.
