Writing the blurb for my first book was a piece of cake. This is my second book and I'm having a helluva time with the blurb. I know it needs help, but I'm not sure where. I can't tell if it's clear, has enough information, if it's disjointed......Any help will be appreciated so much! The name of the book is "Special Levels of Earthly Hell." Subtitle: A Story of Demonic Possession Inspired by Actual Events"
Here it is.......
Drew Collins was an atheist who experienced the world in black and white. As an educated man of science, there was no place in his studies, certainly no place in his life, for demons. And yet he knew they existed. He had seen The Beast for himself. In his own home.
While traveling in Mexico he was charmed by the beautiful Adriana and brought her home to be his wife. But Adriana was Catholic...and she had a secret. While visiting a bruja, a Mexican witch, she contacted a demon while using a Ouija board.
As he watched the demon, The Beast, as he came to call it, take possession of his wife’s body, the very foundation of Drew’s beliefs were shaken to the core. What he witnessed in the night in his own bedroom could not be reconciled with science. And yet he saw it with his own eyes.
As Adriana’s sisters migrated from Mexico to live nearby, The Beast began to wrap its tentacles around their lives as well, literally squeezing the life from them and those they loved.
Drew reached out to two women for help, women experienced with demonic shielding. Would his efforts to overpower an entity he couldn’t label and couldn’t understand come in time to save his marriage and the lives of his loved ones?