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Here I am, late to the discussion. Heck, yeah, you should get another edit, even if the main problem is the tags. This looks like a series, this is the first book in the series, this is part of your back library. Some readers who see a later book in the series will still buy this one first, thinking they should start at the beginning. If disappointed, they'll never get a chance to see you've improved.

The link, btw, is perfect.

I'd add that a writer needs to learn she can convey information another way, and she can trust the reader to figure out the obvious stuff on their own. So many tags tell readers someone said something in either the only way they could say it, or the way they're most likely to say it. When the idea can't be conveyed another way, tell the reader, when a character does something against expectations, share it. Sometimes a person's words and their tone are at odds, and then the writer needs to give the reader an assist. However, a reader probably has a good idea how things operate on planet earth and the tone people use when conveying tragic news or telling someone they've won the lottery and so "somberly" and "excitedly" are extra baggage -- particularly if the author is taking care of business.
 
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