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I'm just finishing book one in a YA urban fantasy trilogy, and I'm having a difficult time with the blurb. I have something written, but I'm really looking for some feedback. So...here it is:
Seventeen-year-old Morgan Abbey has never really fit in.
Ten years ago, her mother disappeared under mysterious circumstances, and in the years since, Morgan has made money by telling fortunes, so she's always stuck out.
But when a mysterious stranger approaches her and insists she is special, Morgan begins to realize that her life may not be what it seems. She is introduced to a world and to abilities she never knew existed.
She soon learns that a centuries-old conflict might be within her power to end. It may be her destiny.
Now, I've left out a number of things (of course), including the news that her mother is alive somewhere, and the fact that some people she knows also begin to show some of these "abilities." Oh, and, also, the step Morgan might need to take to end this conflict is something she doesn't know if she can do.
So, any thoughts, questions, help would be much appreciated! Thanks in advance!
Seventeen-year-old Morgan Abbey has never really fit in.
Ten years ago, her mother disappeared under mysterious circumstances, and in the years since, Morgan has made money by telling fortunes, so she's always stuck out.
But when a mysterious stranger approaches her and insists she is special, Morgan begins to realize that her life may not be what it seems. She is introduced to a world and to abilities she never knew existed.
She soon learns that a centuries-old conflict might be within her power to end. It may be her destiny.
Now, I've left out a number of things (of course), including the news that her mother is alive somewhere, and the fact that some people she knows also begin to show some of these "abilities." Oh, and, also, the step Morgan might need to take to end this conflict is something she doesn't know if she can do.
So, any thoughts, questions, help would be much appreciated! Thanks in advance!