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The male figure is okay.
Something about the female figure seems off. The smile is a big part of it. Not angst-y enough. Too posed.
The font doesn't hold up well in thumbnail for legibility.
Definitely not a YA title, from the blurb...
If there's humor/parody to this, I wonder if a more cartoony approach might be the way to go...
Something about the female figure seems off. The smile is a big part of it. Not angst-y enough. Too posed.
The font doesn't hold up well in thumbnail for legibility.
Definitely not a YA title, from the blurb...
If there's humor/parody to this, I wonder if a more cartoony approach might be the way to go...