[DelilahFawkes]

I laughed when I saw the cover, so I think the image is perfect!   

The one thing I noticed is that your brooding vamp's head seems to be missing its top as it blends into the background. I'm sure that's something that can be fixed. I wanted him to "pop" more.

LOVE the expression on the girl's face.  LOL.

 

[DelilahFawkes]

The male figure is okay.

Something about the female figure seems off. The smile is a big part of it. Not angst-y enough. Too posed.

I was totally assuming from the title that this is a parody type story, and if it is I love the girl's kind of dorky blank expression, like she's making fun of the teen girls who swoon over the brooding vamp.

That was the vibe I was getting, at least, and it cracked me up . I could be way off, though.

 

[DelilahFawkes]

But I love her '

Spoiler

rape

' face, it made me giggle, so I'm torn on it...

This, exactly! I love how she looks surprised, but also like she's kinda into it. Like she's about to say "ooh!" any second now.

 

[DelilahFawkes]

The Michael J. Fox thing was just called Teen Wolf, actually.

And a relaunch of Teen Wolf is currently airing on MTV or something like it...

Omg, how did I not know this! I *have* to watch that show now...

 

[DelilahFawkes]

Yeah, I rolled my eyes when I saw all the commercials leading up to the premier... and then I watched it in a house of girls and got hooked - it's actually really good. But it's Lacrosse instead of Basketball

"It's not as bad as it looks..."