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I laughed when I saw the cover, so I think the image is perfect!  :D 

The one thing I noticed is that your brooding vamp's head seems to be missing its top as it blends into the background. I'm sure that's something that can be fixed. I wanted him to "pop" more.

LOVE the expression on the girl's face.  LOL.
 

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CraigInTwinCities said:
The male figure is okay.

Something about the female figure seems off. The smile is a big part of it. Not angst-y enough. Too posed.
I was totally assuming from the title that this is a parody type story, and if it is I love the girl's kind of dorky blank expression, like she's making fun of the teen girls who swoon over the brooding vamp.

That was the vibe I was getting, at least, and it cracked me up :). I could be way off, though.
 
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