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I won't say "do what you want" because something like this can be disruptive to the reader. However, it doesn't sound like it would be a problem to me.
But you should think ahead too. What are you doing with the third book? Forget first and third and think about which characters you're following. Are you progressing from one point of view, to two to more? Or just exploring those two points of view in different ways?
This may be more thoughtful than you need, but any question is an opportunity, so give it some thought, and take what's useful -- but in the end, write for the story. What's the best experience you can give the reader?
Camille
But you should think ahead too. What are you doing with the third book? Forget first and third and think about which characters you're following. Are you progressing from one point of view, to two to more? Or just exploring those two points of view in different ways?
This may be more thoughtful than you need, but any question is an opportunity, so give it some thought, and take what's useful -- but in the end, write for the story. What's the best experience you can give the reader?
Camille