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When viewed in thumbnail, it has kind of a religious tone to me. I think it is the font/typeface combined with that one word.

Lose the second black bar. ;)

And ... while we're on the topic of beating you up ;D your blurb is a bit vague. There is mention of "powers" but nothing else. I'd like to know if it's ancient magic, voodoo, werewolves, witchcraft, shapeshifters, aliens, angels or demons, or what.

I do like the eyeball and overall concept.

Never admit you went wrong! Everything is an experiment, market research, etc.

ETA: Just read some of the reviews and saw the tags including "religious." So perhaps that is an element, in which case the typeface is perfect. Still want more out of your hard-workin' blurb.
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