I forgive you. I'm silly toocarinasanfey said:
I forgive you. I'm silly toocarinasanfey said:Fifty Shades of Capricious Gray?
...sorry, couldn't resist... hopefully someone less silly than me will be along soon with a proper suggestion...
Maybe, but Capricious is only used once and then it's CapriJen Black said:Book titles are the bane of my life. I'm struggling with one for my latest wip right now!
Sorry, but I'm not sure I could take a heroine named Capricious very seriously. Perhaps others might feel the same way?
Call her Capri in the blurb, then.deedawning said:Maybe, but Capricious is only used once and then it's Capri
AgreedMichaelWallace said:Call her Capri in the blurb, then.
I didn't say the title was terrible, just that it doesn't catch buyers attention. We need something catchy. Something with a little pzazz! Doesn't anyone have an idea?MichaelWallace said:I assume you mean that it underperforms your other books. As to why, I don't think it's a terrible title, and sometimes it's really hard to pin down the real reasons, but maybe the problem is not "Capri", but "Fate". It sounds a little generic. Could you come up with something sexier that hints at sex, lust, desire, etc? Capri's Desires, maybe?