[A. S. Warwick]

After a long time muddling along, my girlfriend offered to start fixing up my covers for me. Amongst other things, she teaches the use of photoshop in high school, so she is a little more advanced in it its use than me.

This was her first attempt (for a free short story I have floating around.) A decided improvement to what I had previous

Looking forward to seeing what she can do in the future with the rest of the covers.

 

[Al Dente]

That's pretty cool! I like it. 

 

[thebookcoverdesigner]

What's going on with the strips?

 

[Carry Lada]

I like it. Very clever!

 

[CoraBuhlert]

Oh, it's the man with the golden helmet. My parents have a copy on their wall, so it immediately brings back memories of home.

Great work, including the shatter effect.

 

[Cheyanne]

Nice cover! I like the broken pieces effect.

 

[Catana]

Nice, except that "Honour" is nearly invisible.

 

[WG McCabe]

Oh, it's the man with the golden helmet. My parents have a copy on their wall, so it immediately brings back memories of home.

Great work, including the shatter effect.

When I was a kid my aunt had one on her wall for years.

 

[Wansit]

Love the strips! If it's supposed to be a portrait and someone's tearing it up because that person was dishonorable perhaps jagged edges would be more appropriate? Either way really like the idea.

 

[KevinMcLaughlin]

Yes, I'd punch up the word "honor" a bit more... Needs more visibility. But nice effect, well done. Good use of a great old image.

 

[60865]

Yep, you can barely read honor.

 

[matthewturner]

Honour needs to stand out more, but I like this. It's strange and makes you look twice. Overall, like the concept