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Hi,
The illustrations are bright and colorful. I noticed a few problems with grammar, etc. For instance, the line, "Hi Abigail, Do You Know What Do You Want To Be When You Grow Up?" Every word should not be capitalized and the second "Do" should not be there: "Hi Abigail, do you know what you want to be when you grow up?" is how it should read. And when Daniel is talking about being a veterinarian, the word then should be used, not than, and there should probably be a couple of commas in there, and the 'maybe' should be capitalized: "That is cool. Maybe I should be a veterinarian, then, and help cure animals?"

There are a few other little things throughout the book, perhaps another look and polish will make your book exactly what you'd like it to be. Also, there are some grammatical errors in the description on the book's Amazon page. If all of those are fixed, you'll have the book and description that you want. Good luck with your first children's book!
 

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It is bright and fun - thanks for sharing.  I think a brighter yellow for your main title make make it pop more on the cover.  You might consider letting your amazon sample show a page or two of the story. 

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