I like the cover, but it feels more Sci-Fi to me.
That right there would make me want to read your book. You've given enough story hints there to… to… to fill a really exciting book!JACipriano said:Abby Banks is your typical sixteen-year-old girl, except that her entire life has been one big lie. Kidnapped as a young girl and fostered by a government agency as collateral, Abby never knew she was important… until her mother's terrorist organization unleashes a devastating attack on the facility.
Will Robert and Mary ever get back together? Will Robert's mother's plan to separate them forever be stopped by Jim?Will Stephen be able to keep Abby safe? Will Abby be able to stop her mother before it's too late, or will they both wind up as speed bumps on her mother's road to world domination?
It's just a personal gut reaction. Can't put my finger on it. But it's just one opinion. Some others seem to like itJACipriano said:Why do you feel it's bland? (and yes, I do like hearing it.)