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Nice update.
Only tweak I see: you should use a different font such as sans-serif for your author name and "a novel" while making the book title larger (even if it takes up two lines).
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I agree about the font.

I'd also like to add that, in my opinion, the author picture sticks out like a sore thumb, sorry! The background is such a vivid yellow that the contrast with the sudden white background in the picture is jarring. Maybe a thin frame around the author picture would help?
 

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Big improvement! I'd make subtitle (notes and 'a novel') smaller. That brings out the title and makes it more prominent. No one will understand what subtitle means either way on Amazon and it will be fine in print either way. Author image does look bit too much, so if you can lower opacity of it or blend mode. Other than that, good job!
 
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