[Allyson J.]

I'm working with a designer on a new cover for my Edwardian historical adventure romance. My old cover was not conveying the adventure aspect of my novel. My designer sent this to me today. I think we're definitely heading in the right direction, but I'm not sure we're there yet.

Since you all were so helpful the last time I posted about my cover woes, could you please give me some thoughts/advice on this one? (Old one on the left, new one on the right). Thanks!!

Edited because my picture wasn't showing up. Sorry!

 

[Allyson J.]

Sorry everyone, my photo wasn't showing up. I've corrected it. The one on the LEFT is the old one (roses). The one on the RIGHT is new. Thanks again!

 

[Allyson J.]

Thanks everyone! My designer (Emma Graves) did a fantastic job. She really worked with me to get a feel for my novel. The new cover definitely says historical adventure...but would readers know that it is a romance? If not, that may be my fault--I was very specific about not wanting a clinch cover. Also, I do agree that the woman and the elephant need to be bigger.