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·Do you think the word 'promiscuous' as used in the following blurb (for an already published book) is offensive or could easily be thought of as offensive - ie. would it be better to change it to something like 'reckless'?
The heroic fantasy saga of a boy searching for his mom.
The adopted son of an earl, Mark fears he will never live up to his father's expectations. But when he learns his mother is a famous warrior who once saved their country from barbarian invasion, he sets out to meet her and become more than the underachiever he no longer wants to be.
Joined by wild and promiscuous warrior princess Ann, Mark travels through barbarian lands and cursed wastes while ever hounded by the minions of an evil duke who plans to kidnap him to control his father. Will timid Mark find the strength to survive endless mercenaries, demonic shrubs, an awkward romance with Ann, and the duke's conniving son who just happens to be named Marcus?
Also, would it be better to cut off the last sentence after 'romance with Ann'?
The heroic fantasy saga of a boy searching for his mom.
The adopted son of an earl, Mark fears he will never live up to his father's expectations. But when he learns his mother is a famous warrior who once saved their country from barbarian invasion, he sets out to meet her and become more than the underachiever he no longer wants to be.
Joined by wild and promiscuous warrior princess Ann, Mark travels through barbarian lands and cursed wastes while ever hounded by the minions of an evil duke who plans to kidnap him to control his father. Will timid Mark find the strength to survive endless mercenaries, demonic shrubs, an awkward romance with Ann, and the duke's conniving son who just happens to be named Marcus?
Also, would it be better to cut off the last sentence after 'romance with Ann'?