I have rewritten this a few times and I'm still not happy with it. It is the Amazon sales copy for my indie fiction magazine called eFiction. Any and all advice is greatly appreciated.
"What is so special about this magazine?"
That is what 99% of people who stumble onto this page are thinking. eFiction is different than every other fiction magazine in the world. Every other magazine is exclusive, eFiction is inclusive. When other magazines reject manuscripts with standard form letters, eFiction encourages writers to join the group and work together to get their work up to spec for publication. This makes the magazine better than any other in the world.
We are the only indie fiction magazine in existence. There are many literary journals and fiction magazines, but no indie fiction magazines. We are pushing the boundaries of a new genre.
Try eFiction for 14 days free. If you don't like our stories, no big deal-just cancel your subscription and you won't be charged a penny.
Ever feel like there aren't enough hours in the day to read? Stories in eFiction are your escape route from the monotony of the daily grind.