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OK, so I posted a first draft of my ya sci-fi romance, Faded, book blurb a month or so back. After some feedback both here and other places, I've revised and would LOVE some more feedback! Thanks in advance for your advice and constructive criticism!

For eighteen year old Kari Tucker waking up in a stranger's bedroom with no memory of how she got there is just the tip of the iceburg. With everyone insisting that she's speaking a foreign language and a ring of fire burning in the sky where the sun should be, it doesn't take long for Kari to realize she's a lot further from home than she ever imagined. And that's not all. What if everything she thought she knew about her life was a lie?
 
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Off the top of my head, maybe more about the character? What is about her that stands out, and why should we care about her?
 
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