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Hi
I'm just about ready to publish my third short story and would like some feedback about my cover and blurb (especially the blurb)
David is a very aggresive young man, in fact he's a psychopath. When he isn't playing violent video games he's daydreaming about different ways to murder his family.
At a run down second hand store David finds Sharpshooter, touted as the ultimate in violence and survival. He knows he must have that game and will do anything to own it-
including murder.
But Sharpshooter is no ordinary game, it will plunge David into a nightmare realm where he must face and defeat the victims of his past crimes and if he fails he loses not only his life
but his very soul as well.
I'm just about ready to publish my third short story and would like some feedback about my cover and blurb (especially the blurb)

David is a very aggresive young man, in fact he's a psychopath. When he isn't playing violent video games he's daydreaming about different ways to murder his family.
At a run down second hand store David finds Sharpshooter, touted as the ultimate in violence and survival. He knows he must have that game and will do anything to own it-
including murder.
But Sharpshooter is no ordinary game, it will plunge David into a nightmare realm where he must face and defeat the victims of his past crimes and if he fails he loses not only his life
but his very soul as well.