Still no improvement in my blurb writing skills. This is my attempt for the first of the 14 episodes in my new serial. Each episode runs 14-19,000 words. (This one comes in at 16,100.) Target audience is 16-25 year old females. I can't really call it "Coming of Age" because sex is handled without graphic details. I think this blurb needs a lot of help from all you experts out there:
"Break away, Hayley, break away!" Anna implored her beloved great-niece so many times. Hayley hears the words again as the lawyer reads the terms of the trust.
At twenty one, the college senior still lives at home and follows all the rules. In accepting Anna's bequest, she disobeys her parents and leaves school mid-year to move into Anna's upscale New York City apartment.
BEGINNING is the first of fourteen episodes in which Hayley explores far flung corners of the world, and also herself. Romance finds her more than once, sometimes with the right guys and sometimes with the wrong ones.
EDIT to make type font legible.
"Break away, Hayley, break away!" Anna implored her beloved great-niece so many times. Hayley hears the words again as the lawyer reads the terms of the trust.
At twenty one, the college senior still lives at home and follows all the rules. In accepting Anna's bequest, she disobeys her parents and leaves school mid-year to move into Anna's upscale New York City apartment.
BEGINNING is the first of fourteen episodes in which Hayley explores far flung corners of the world, and also herself. Romance finds her more than once, sometimes with the right guys and sometimes with the wrong ones.
EDIT to make type font legible.