Stupid Blurb!

Okay, my last blurb attempt got (rightly) stomped. Do either of these look better?

OPTION ONE:

At sixteen, Rachel Boone is sent to jail for killing her father. But after four years, he reappears, plotting a wave of suicide bombings.
Only Rachel can stop him; nobody else understands the extraordinary powers he developed after the mysterious 'Seventeen Seconds' swept the globe.
Rachel enlists the help of Lark Larson, an easygoing slacker with bizarre abilities of his own. Rachel doesn't have any powers other than her unflinching willingness to put herself on the line ... but as far as Lark can tell, that's more than enough.

OPTION TWO:

A kidnapped friend. A wave of suicide bombings. A city whipped into a killing frenzy.
After serving four years for the murder of her father, Rachel Boone is suddenly released. Because her father is still alive ... and an imminent threat to national security.
In the wake of a mysterious global event called the 'Seventeen Seconds,' Rachel's father developed extraordinary powers. But he's not the only one. Determined to stop her father, Rachel enlists Lark Larson, an easygoing handyman with strange abilities of his own.
As Rachel and Lark face a team of super-powered 'actives', Lark worries that Rachel is outgunned-the only extraordinary thing about her is her courage. But sometimes he thinks that she's the most powerful one of all.