Personally I feel if it's done right, original Superhero stories are very epic, and OP it seems your idea/vision is fantastic, and wonderful, and lovely, and I will definitely check it out, and I love the way your characters are designed. But for the record, even though I don't personally share this opinion, or feel this way; on the count of, as I kinda like more obscure and different Superhero/Fantasy ideas. I'm not that harsh of a critic, but I've noticed some people really have choice words for a Spider Man or X Men lite or copy version. When a lot of original Superhero ideas are amazing; Readers are hard to please, and they can be cruel sometimes. So I don't get a lot of the criticism. But they're just wrong, so yeah.
I have a story idea, which probably in some alternate timeline, I might get published one day, who knows lol; which is basically about an urban time travel plot, taking place in Medieval Times/Middle Ages etc. to where it's basically a Power Rangers bootleg, but that's okay. Half the MC's are from the dark ages/uncivilized, and the other half of the MC's, find a time travel portal, and get stuck in this era etc. and they are kinda more diverse city people used to social media/internet culture etc, and they team up and become friends, and all have super powers to stop an evil force. so yeah etc. lol.
I feel your story is great OP, and I'm convinced and interested.
