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I'm preparing the cover of Thaloc has a Body for print, and I'm working on the back-cover blurb. Would you all be willing to help me make it better? Thaloc Has a Body is a paranormal mystery/thriller, with a twist of a romance.
Any advice would be GREATLY appreciated.The Truth returns to torment our favorite Psychic Detective, Brodie Wade. This time, it warns him of his own death by way of a children's sing-song taunt. According to the taunt, in three days he will be married, and then he dies. But before he can solve that riddle, everything comes undone. Detective Phil Dawson brings Brodie a set of three impossible cases, and Officer Jamie Stanford blindsides Brodie with a date... the first in his life. The Truth seems to derail everything, warning Brodie of the existence of a creature named Thaloc, describing how someone wants to kill Detective Dawson, but the message is - as always - too scrambled to decipher. The message needs to be seen from the proper perspective to unravel.
Can Brodie save his best friend before his own clock runs out?