New Rule: When you make a video to push your indie book, proof it before posting.
I burst out laughing when I saw it. So much for gaining my interest.Lilith said:OMG - it jumps right out at you. Cannot believe that was released . . . . WOW!
And since I think that spelling is fundamental to a good written piece, I would not even pick up this book after seeing this video.
I guess they didn't use a word processor for the next originally. Any decent spellchecker would have picked it up.Kathleen Valentine said:Slide #2 -- Put your proof-reading hat on.
Like you, I laughed.Kathleen Valentine said:It's a beautiful trailer (other than the message that beautiful women are evil) but when you open with a mistake like that you'll have people snickering, not intrigued.
gotta agree archer, the transitions seem to assume a very slow reading rate. "there are seven that have been named....." [long pause] "deadly"Archer said:There is 'a rat' in separate.
AND the darn thing was too long! Too SLOW. (Just my opinion, mind...)