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I don't read too much urban fantasy so I could be way off...
I just stuck Thunder Hunter in my reading pile for my upcoming trip so I think your blurb is pretty darn good! The first paragraph and tag line are very enticing. The second paragraph could be mention whether Chloe is his love interest or not? Maybe expand on the poison and clarify his age and whether he's totally human or half-human?
Cover-wise I might do something with the guy. Sword--yes. Leather Vest thing --meh. Bright colours and wisps of magic/fire seem to be in this year.
I just stuck Thunder Hunter in my reading pile for my upcoming trip so I think your blurb is pretty darn good! The first paragraph and tag line are very enticing. The second paragraph could be mention whether Chloe is his love interest or not? Maybe expand on the poison and clarify his age and whether he's totally human or half-human?
Cover-wise I might do something with the guy. Sword--yes. Leather Vest thing --meh. Bright colours and wisps of magic/fire seem to be in this year.
