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Which title do you like the most?

  • The Fairy Love

    Votes: 1 16.7%
  • The Fairy in Love

    Votes: 3 50.0%
  • The Fairy's Love

    Votes: 2 33.3%

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338 Views 8 Replies 6 Participants Last post by  Darryl Hughes
I'm here again in need of help. Well, to hear third party's thoughts on it.

I'm going to update the short story's title. The story is an urban fantasy, with the main character being a fairy. So, right now, I have three possibilities that I can't decide between them.

The possibilities:

The Fairy Love
The Fairy in Love
The Fairy's Love
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The second one just rings better.... It seems catchier.

Sounds like a good theme for a story. I wish you the best with it.
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The first one rings the best. It reads like a book title with a little mystique as to the story, as opposed to a sentence which tells the reader what it is about.
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The first one rings the best. It reads like a book title with a little mystique as to the story, as opposed to a sentence which tells the reader what it is about.
How about dropping the "The" and going with "Fairy in Love"?
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The first one rings the best. It reads like a book title with a little mystique as to the story, as opposed to a sentence which tells the reader what it is about.
I agree, I too voted for it.
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If it's an urban fantasy about a fairy in love all of the titles are just so on the nose. Why not try "A Fairy's Tale"?

EDIT: Okay, this just popped into my head and I really liked it: "A fairy kind of love".

Dee
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Thank you all for voting and expressing your opinion. I really appreciate that you explained why you like a certain title.
The second one just rings better.... It seems catchier.

Sounds like a good theme for a story. I wish you the best with it.
Thank you.

The first one rings the best. It reads like a book title with a little mystique as to the story, as opposed to a sentence which tells the reader what it is about.
Good point.

How about dropping the "The" and going with "Fairy in Love"?
That would work too.

If it's an urban fantasy about a fairy in love all of the titles are just so on the nose. Why not try "A Fairy's Tale"?

EDIT: Okay, this just popped into my head and I really liked it: "A fairy kind of love".

Dee
It is about a fairy in love. We learn about it in the first two paragraphs.
"A fairy kind of love" it's a good title, too.
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So, I went with Fairy in Love.
Again, thank you all for sharing your opinions with me and for voting.
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So, I went with Fairy in Love.
Again, thank you all for sharing your opinions with me and for voting.
Would sound better with an "a" in it: "A fairy in Love".

But that's just me.

Dee
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