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Fairies and Fireflies takes place in the Wide Wild Field. The book I'm currently writing, The Woods and the Wildfolk takes place in a forested area just north of the field. I've been calling it the Wide Wild Woods, but one of my beta readers says that's a tongue twister that stops her reading every time she runs into it.  I could call it the Wide Wild Forest, but I like the other's alliteration.

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shimmering said:
For me, the hardest part of saying it is "wide wild". Once you've got past there, it's easy, whether it's field, forest or woods...

But, after a couple tries, even "wide wild" isn't that tough.
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