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Kirkland Heath escapes his problems by venturing to remote worlds in other universes. But one particular planet draws him into a conflict so fierce it forces him to rethink his views. There he meets Mesca, a tempestuous young woman with powerful abilities, abilities that catch the attention of the Arbiters, an intergalactic police force that erases entire worlds it deems a threat.
While Kirkland and Mesca join up with a band of feisty rebels, they must do x and y ... or face erasure on a planetary scale.
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Unable to complete.
Feels like there's a challenge missing, something more salient than simply facing the enemy. Do Kirk and Mesca have to get over any personal conflicts? What about conflicts with the rebels? Any challenges there? Any personal demons Kirkland has to get over? What problems was he running away from? Anything interesting about how he got this power to go to other worlds?
Anyway, just my take on it. Feel completely free to ignore it all. Hopefully something inspires you though
Kirkland Heath escapes his problems by venturing to remote worlds in other universes. But one particular planet draws him into a conflict so fierce it forces him to rethink his views. There he meets Mesca, a tempestuous young woman with powerful abilities, abilities that catch the attention of the Arbiters, an intergalactic police force that erases entire worlds it deems a threat.
While Kirkland and Mesca join up with a band of feisty rebels, they must do x and y ... or face erasure on a planetary scale.
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Unable to complete.
Feels like there's a challenge missing, something more salient than simply facing the enemy. Do Kirk and Mesca have to get over any personal conflicts? What about conflicts with the rebels? Any challenges there? Any personal demons Kirkland has to get over? What problems was he running away from? Anything interesting about how he got this power to go to other worlds?
Anyway, just my take on it. Feel completely free to ignore it all. Hopefully something inspires you though