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Well done, it looks like you put the effort in!

I will advise you please look at your blurb a little bit.

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He needs to run, yet old habits die hard. Charles plants a bug on the luxury yacht where the woman met her end, a reckless and naive act perhaps. But what this gambit reveals is as shocking as it is audacious, a plot involving the massive ITER fusion experiment as it prepares for its inaugural test. Many will die, not least his own daughter who's there as a reporter for a major TV channel.

I'm not sure you should dump spoilers like that, it might spoil things a bit for the reader who already knows in advance, spoiling the shock of finding out mid-story. That's just my little niggle. It all looks good otherwise.
 
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