Hi, Lena.
Know what? I like it.
You might break it up so that it doesn't read like one "long" paragraph, etc.
The blurb doctors around here might suggest that.
I think you're blurb is rather nifty: short & to the point & has this (potential)
reader intrigued.
Mind you, this is not even the genre I read in...but you have me interested.
I get the feeling the audience you're aiming for will go for it (the reviews
already prove it). You have no idea how tough it is to get that many
positive reviews that fast.
Looks like you hit the ground running.
Best,
Kirkee
P.S.
The reason you "don't like it" is because you're too
close to it & looked at it too many times. Like the cover, too.
Know what? I like it.
You might break it up so that it doesn't read like one "long" paragraph, etc.
The blurb doctors around here might suggest that.
I think you're blurb is rather nifty: short & to the point & has this (potential)
reader intrigued.
Mind you, this is not even the genre I read in...but you have me interested.
I get the feeling the audience you're aiming for will go for it (the reviews
already prove it). You have no idea how tough it is to get that many
positive reviews that fast.
Looks like you hit the ground running.

Best,
Kirkee
P.S.
The reason you "don't like it" is because you're too
close to it & looked at it too many times. Like the cover, too.