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Well, I've gone back to the drawing board and tried to re work this synopsis. And now I'm wondering if it's too long? What do you think? Does it pull you in and make you want to read it? I'm almost banging my head against the wall with it.
So any suggestions would be great.
Oh, and just so you know it's the second book in the series.
Shield the Heart (a YA novel)
Lilly's gift of reading the heart seemed like a curse, but when she discovered her gift was linked to an old, Russian prophecy it changed everything. What she never questioned, though, was her own heart.
When the prophecy pulls Lilly back to Russia and demands to be fulfilled she is torn between love and loyalty. She must make the most difficult decision of her life and choose between the two. But Lilly's decision is farther reaching than even she is willing to acknowledge. It stretches from east to west; from the past to the future.
But there's more to the old prophecy than Lilly realized. Will enemy forces try to stop her?
One thing is certain - there will be casualties. And sparing those closest to her may be impossible. While Seth attempts to shield Lilly from truth, Nikolai reveals secrets that could change everything.
As Lilly falls into the arms of Russia she must decide. Will love or loyalty reign? And can she live with the consequences? Two sides compete for Lilly's heart and she must find the answers she needs before her enemies find her.
Shield the Heart, by T.K. Richardson, is the riveting second book in the series and takes Lilly deeper into Russia's mysterious past… and her future.
Thanks for your input!
Oh, and just so you know it's the second book in the series.
Shield the Heart (a YA novel)
Lilly's gift of reading the heart seemed like a curse, but when she discovered her gift was linked to an old, Russian prophecy it changed everything. What she never questioned, though, was her own heart.
When the prophecy pulls Lilly back to Russia and demands to be fulfilled she is torn between love and loyalty. She must make the most difficult decision of her life and choose between the two. But Lilly's decision is farther reaching than even she is willing to acknowledge. It stretches from east to west; from the past to the future.
But there's more to the old prophecy than Lilly realized. Will enemy forces try to stop her?
One thing is certain - there will be casualties. And sparing those closest to her may be impossible. While Seth attempts to shield Lilly from truth, Nikolai reveals secrets that could change everything.
As Lilly falls into the arms of Russia she must decide. Will love or loyalty reign? And can she live with the consequences? Two sides compete for Lilly's heart and she must find the answers she needs before her enemies find her.
Shield the Heart, by T.K. Richardson, is the riveting second book in the series and takes Lilly deeper into Russia's mysterious past… and her future.
Thanks for your input!