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I'm coming to the finish line for The Wayfarer King (sequel to Kinshield), and I've kind of dragged my feet on the blurb. I have a few versions, but none of them strike me as The One. Here's my favorite. If you don't mind, tell me what could be improved.
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Ritol, the most powerful beyonder from the realm of chaos, has been magically trapped in the palace for over two hundred years. While Ritol remains imprisoned in the realm of men, the beyonder invasion will never end, and innocent people will continue to die.
Having newly claimed the right to rule Thendylath as king, former warrant knight Gavin Kinshield must protect his people by ending the beyonder attacks. Along with the crown, Gavin received the power of Wayfarer, giving him the power to journey to all seven realms. To end the invasion, he must journey to the realm of chaos and summon Ritol. But can he escape before the demon kills him, devours his soul and takes his place as Wayfarer?
If wizard Brodas Ravenkind has his way, Gavin will never make it that far. Not only does Brodas want the throne for himself, he wants revenge for his cousin's murder too. After all, he made a promise the first time Gavin crossed him…
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More info:
beyonders are basically monsters that seem to pop out of thin air and attack whoever they come upon. Ritol is the biggest, baddest of them all and is referred to as an it, often called a demon or "the beyonder prince."
Gavin *just* became king at the end of book 1. He has no army and no money.
Thanks in advance for your help!
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Ritol, the most powerful beyonder from the realm of chaos, has been magically trapped in the palace for over two hundred years. While Ritol remains imprisoned in the realm of men, the beyonder invasion will never end, and innocent people will continue to die.
Having newly claimed the right to rule Thendylath as king, former warrant knight Gavin Kinshield must protect his people by ending the beyonder attacks. Along with the crown, Gavin received the power of Wayfarer, giving him the power to journey to all seven realms. To end the invasion, he must journey to the realm of chaos and summon Ritol. But can he escape before the demon kills him, devours his soul and takes his place as Wayfarer?
If wizard Brodas Ravenkind has his way, Gavin will never make it that far. Not only does Brodas want the throne for himself, he wants revenge for his cousin's murder too. After all, he made a promise the first time Gavin crossed him…
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More info:
beyonders are basically monsters that seem to pop out of thin air and attack whoever they come upon. Ritol is the biggest, baddest of them all and is referred to as an it, often called a demon or "the beyonder prince."
Gavin *just* became king at the end of book 1. He has no army and no money.
Thanks in advance for your help!